1. The man is driving the hot air ballon. 2. There were so many turtles flying
in the air. 3. The turtle is pulling the hot air ballon. 4. Turtles are going at
the same way. 5. The man is jumping to the turtle two times
Hi Alberth, I enjoyed reading your sentences. I particularly like the action words that you have used; driving, flying, pulling, jumping. I also like your accurate use of capital letters, and you've only missed one full stop. Maybe next time, try to start your sentences with more interesting words, e.g. Many turtles flying together across the sky. Can you do this? Well done and keep writing. :)
Well done Alberth, nice short sentences. Next time you do not need to number them.
ReplyDeleteHi Alberth, I enjoyed reading your sentences. I particularly like the action words that you have used; driving, flying, pulling, jumping. I also like your accurate use of capital letters, and you've only missed one full stop.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time, try to start your sentences with more interesting words, e.g. Many turtles flying together across the sky.
Can you do this?
Well done and keep writing. :)