Once in a lifetime, an old man called Archie,Archie was going on a holiday. He
went on a cruise ship called 'One Direction'. Suddenly the ship sank deeply, but
he is the only one who can survive. After a few years something magic
happends... his ship fly up to the sky. At that moment he saw thousand enourmous
turtle, at last the ship couldn't sail, so he tide a rope on a turtle and
finally it brokes.
Well done Amel, I like that you have written about what happened before the start of the film.
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ReplyDeleteWell done Amel. I really like the way you have added detail to the animation, for example creating a name for the boat and main character. I particularly liked the sentence you started with, 'at that moment'. Great writing.
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