Sunday, 26 May 2013

QT 5 SENTENCE

The sky was so peaceful.
Everything moved slowly including the music.
The ship was floating and not moving.
I wish I could fly like the turtles.
I wish I could have an adventure like that.
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6 comments:

  1. TN26 May 2013 at 21:50

    Lovely QT, I really like this.I like the second line best.

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  2. sarah27 May 2013 at 14:26

    Even I liked the second line!

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  3. Akira4q27 May 2013 at 20:41

    It looks like a poem to me QT!

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    1. QT Hisani 4Q12 June 2013 at 19:53

      But it's not a poem akira

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  4. Akira4q27 May 2013 at 20:42

    Next time you should write with connectives because you are nearly the top group;

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  5. Mrs Tucker (5SC Team)29 May 2013 at 19:05

    Hi, I really enjoyed reading your 5 sentence challenge, it has a calming effect to it. Maybe next time you could make your sentences longer by using similes in your writing...that would be very impressive!
    For example; The sky is as peaceful as a silent dream.
    What do you think?
    Well done and keep writing. :)

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